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 Role Models (2008)
IMDB rating: 7.70
Plot: Wild behavior forces a pair of energy drink reps to enroll in a Big Brother program.
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find and download Role Models here and download version for iPod
Directors: Wain David
Actors: Rudd Paul,Scott Seann William,Arenal Shane,Ashworth Landon,Bellow Tajh,Brochu Hunter,Cartwright Ryan,Collins Caleb Matthew,Doss Kurt,Gerlich Garret,Henderson James,Jeong Ken,Kubr Mark,Lawrence Cody,Lo Truglio Joe,Comedy,
out of 10 rate this very very lyrical rhyme yo,,,rap hip hop?
council estates bouncing havans of hate,no saving grace
only raving round the place,children copying what their seen,its obscene
worrying about green,burrying their dream,
cynicaly smoking zest,clinacly broke and depreesed
the drug scence is humuongus,morphine mixed with fungus
dealing wheeling stealing in the bacterial streets
so they can be kneeling to material treats,sick of serial and sweets
braking the law to reach new feets,kids need new role models quick
because the dole players are thick,standing still like a brick,
underage illegal thinking leads to thunderous rage and drinking
life sleping and shrinking,but hows to blame its the goverment
when they gona discover its all bent,half sealing cracks with rubber not cement,
from the slums themself but wearing a posh accent
i aint agrresive so i aint saying this in spite,in my opion
the bark is worse than the bite,so i dont fight i leave my blackmark when i write
Hey. I saw the e-mail. Honestly the first time I read this, I just breezed through it so you would answer my question. But now that I’ll take the full time to answer it properly, there’s something very important that you have to realize before becoming a rapper: It’s more important to give an effective message than it is to be extremely lyrical. Every time I tell this to people I use the same example. Listen to this song. Maybe listen to it a few times, and really analyze every line down to the last word. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JNcloTmvT eA
There isn’t a single complicated line in that song. It’s literally something my 13 year old sister could write, and yet it is one of the best rap songs ever made. Why? Because Pac had a message in his head. He didn’t try to cram as many multi’s as he could into the rap and make it as fancy and lyrically skillful as he could. He asked himself the same four questions that everyone should be asking themself any time that they write something with a message in it.
Q1: What is the subject that I want to rap about?
Q2: What do I want to say about that subject?
Q3: Who am I writing this for?
Q4: What is the best way to go about expressing that?
Pac’s answers to those questions were simple, and there’s no doubt about what they were.
A1: I want to rap about my mom
A2: I want to say that she’s the nicest, sweetest, most important woman I’ve ever met in my life
A3: I’m speaking to my mom, and also to an audience who wants to feel the emotions that I express in order to relate to their mothers
A4: The best way to express this is by using a smooth, slow beat, pouring my heart out, expressing my deepest emotions, and keeping my lyrics simple enough for everyone to understand.
Now, you need to ask yourself the same questions.
Q1: What is the subject of my rap?
A1: It appears that your rap is about the drug problems in the slums.
Q2: What do I want to say about that subject?
A1: It appears that you’re just describing how bad it is. At the last few lines you mention the government, but you don’t say anything about what they’re actually doing. So basically, you’re not saying anything that we don’t already know. Which is fine, as long as you can be creative with it.
Q3: Who am I rapping to?
A3: This isn’t directed at anyone, which is one of the biggest problems. Remember, you’re not just rapping about the slums, you’re sending a message. If you’re rapping to the suburban kids who don’t know what it’s like in the ghetto, you have to go deeper into it and take time to paint a vivid picture in their minds instead of just touching on one subject at a time. For instance, listen to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bFobbGqxv tE
If you’re talking to ghetto kids, you’re basically preaching to the choir, which is pointless unless you talk about these things in a creative way. Either use more metaphors, and attempt to do it in a way that has never been done before, or put a SPECIFIC message behind it such as a personal story or a spirit-raising slum song, For instance, listen to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=loPRsrqrD Xc
If you’re talking to the government, you want them to do something about it, so get on their case and point out what they’re doing wrong instead of saying "i aint agrresive so i aint saying this in spite,in my opion". For instance, listen to this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nn2i4uvmK kw&feature=related
And finally, question 4, you can only decide once you figure out the answer to question 3. Feel free to e-mail me if you don’t understand any of this.
NexxJordan | Feb 04, 2010
i like it its pretty good
Joe | Feb 04, 2010
siht man how many multis in that
ill man 10/10
you ill,got sum skillz
mciiiiiiiiiiiiiiii | Feb 04, 2010
best rhyme of this generation ill tell u that
Shpetime B | Feb 04, 2010
2/10
Truly Beats, Rhymes and Knives! | Feb 04, 2010
It’s pretty good.
One thing I’d say though is that a lot of your lines that rhyme with a word in the line could easily be two lines, broken at the rhyme.
Like
Cynicaly smoking zest, clinacly broke and depressed
is no differant to
Cynically smoking zest
Clinically broke and depressed
If you get what I mean.
Which is still actually a pretty good pair of lines but you could try
Zest smoked cynically, so clinically depressed
Cos I lost my status as the best by being broke like (and i cant think of a rhyme for depressed)
just my thoughts. But even if you don’t like it I reckon its a 6/10
Need to hear it on a beat though.
Max | Feb 04, 2010
9/10 good stuff weaved together like a fine cloth and refreshingly real. Keep on doin your own thing man, u got somethin.
Thomas | Feb 04, 2010
Dope- 9/10
Nas nd Em (fvck the NY Jets) | Feb 04, 2010